Star Trek: The Next Generation's pilot episode is a mixed bag. On the one hand, there's a decent cast and everything LOOKS better than the original series -- the spacecrafts, F/X, costumes and sets -- but, on the other, half of the story is goofy and awkwardly implemented into the main story.
The "goofy" part is the character of Q, an omniscient being, who suddenly appears on the Bridge of the Enterprise just past the 5-minute mark (!) and shortly later transports most of the Bridge crew to some absurd trial against humanity with a bunch of barbarians as the audience. This part of the story was written by Gene Roddenberry and he was pressured to add it to D.C. Fontana's script to make "Encounter at Farpoint" a double episode.
The problem with the Q subplot is that it's premature. The purpose of a pilot episode is to establish the characters and the basic tone of the series. Fontana's story about the cast grouping together and their experiences at the Farpoint station accomplish this, but Roddenberry's Q story seems tacked-on, outlandish and premature.
Sure, the character of Q was based on Trelane from the Original Series episode "The Squire of Gothos," but (1) that episode wasn't introduced until the second half of the first season when the serious tone of the series was well established, and (2) Trelane was presented in a believable way despite his goofy antics. It's called good writing.
In "Encounter at Farpoint," by contrast, it's not 6 minutes into the story -- the very first episode of the series -- and this goofball character suddenly appears on the Bridge and proceeds to kidnap the Bridge crew and take them to some bizarre trial in the midst of a bunch of uncouth barbarians. These events take place in the first half hour and it just mars the seriousness and credible-ness of the rest of the 2-part episode.
Thankfully, everything else is like the Original Series, just better, at least as far as appearances go. The writing wouldn't catch up till the third and fourth seasons, although there are some gems here & there in the first two, e.g. "Heart of Glory," "Conspiracy," "The Schizoid Man," "A Matter of Honor," "The Dauphin" and "Q Who."
The pilot runs 1 hour, 31 minutes.
GRADE: B-/C+
The "goofy" part is the character of Q, an omniscient being, who suddenly appears on the Bridge of the Enterprise just past the 5-minute mark (!) and shortly later transports most of the Bridge crew to some absurd trial against humanity with a bunch of barbarians as the audience. This part of the story was written by Gene Roddenberry and he was pressured to add it to D.C. Fontana's script to make "Encounter at Farpoint" a double episode.
The problem with the Q subplot is that it's premature. The purpose of a pilot episode is to establish the characters and the basic tone of the series. Fontana's story about the cast grouping together and their experiences at the Farpoint station accomplish this, but Roddenberry's Q story seems tacked-on, outlandish and premature.
Sure, the character of Q was based on Trelane from the Original Series episode "The Squire of Gothos," but (1) that episode wasn't introduced until the second half of the first season when the serious tone of the series was well established, and (2) Trelane was presented in a believable way despite his goofy antics. It's called good writing.
In "Encounter at Farpoint," by contrast, it's not 6 minutes into the story -- the very first episode of the series -- and this goofball character suddenly appears on the Bridge and proceeds to kidnap the Bridge crew and take them to some bizarre trial in the midst of a bunch of uncouth barbarians. These events take place in the first half hour and it just mars the seriousness and credible-ness of the rest of the 2-part episode.
Thankfully, everything else is like the Original Series, just better, at least as far as appearances go. The writing wouldn't catch up till the third and fourth seasons, although there are some gems here & there in the first two, e.g. "Heart of Glory," "Conspiracy," "The Schizoid Man," "A Matter of Honor," "The Dauphin" and "Q Who."
The pilot runs 1 hour, 31 minutes.
GRADE: B-/C+