There is real mystery and wonder in a futuristic city like this, but due to the story telling, characters, drama, you never witness any of it.
It should start by showing someone that you can personally relate to, coming into the city for the first time. Instead, it starts with hero shots of unlikeable villain characters.
There's lots of opportunity for multiple characters to have relatable stories so you're not stuck deciding whether you like an initial main character or not. Instead, multiple characters pick fights, grumble, troll, and groom each other.
Lots of opportunity to show the mystery of city, people trying to surivive. Instead, you have one to three second flash shots, so you don't understand anything.
It should start by showing someone that you can personally relate to, coming into the city for the first time. Instead, it starts with hero shots of unlikeable villain characters.
There's lots of opportunity for multiple characters to have relatable stories so you're not stuck deciding whether you like an initial main character or not. Instead, multiple characters pick fights, grumble, troll, and groom each other.
Lots of opportunity to show the mystery of city, people trying to surivive. Instead, you have one to three second flash shots, so you don't understand anything.